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A Woman in Need is written by an author with intelligent and an independent mind who manipulates the English Language with such dexterity that one starts to wonder if he had his training in a British School. There are lots of moral lessons to be learnt in the novel as the author has cleverly discussed young women caught in the trap of polygamy just because of filthy lucre. But Ngozi became an exceptional, kind, hardworking and a moral example to all, even as she is a lesson in sophistication. The book is therefore very suitable for all students of literature.

Alhaji Y. A. Kareem Principal,
 Senior Secondary School,
 Moslem Comprehensive High School,
 Ijebu- Ode, 
Nigeria.
 February, 2010.


As a youth developer and a dynamic moral teacher, I feel thrilled reading this book. I recommend that our Ladies read and realize that all actions and behaviours have contributing effect on adulthood and nature has a way of dealing with situations.

Dr.Ayokunlemi Oshin- Idowu.
 Executive Director Beauty for Ashes Organization 
Ilese-Ijebu. Ogun State. 
Nigeria.

FOREWORD
 A Woman in Need is a masterpiece of simplicity. Reading through, one perceives it as either an Autobiography or a Biography, yet the novel is neither. The simple fact of the matter is that this literary piece is true to life. Every event therein is relevant to the contemporary life of a typical human being, a Nigerian to be precise. 

Whoever cares to read this book will not regret the action, rather the reader will add to whatever knowledge he already has, as the novel is full of life experiences. It is in the book that the loved suddenly becomes the hater and the hated. Loyalty suddenly becomes betrayal and hope is suddenly dashed. 

The man is confused and is at the crossroads. He loses ALL he has. He is jilted and dumped by his lover, lost his only child and no job in sight! The novel takes a reader through journey by various means of transportation; air, rail, and road. It takes a reader to the various tribes, religions and culture of Nigeria. 

Through the book also, the reader feels the pains of the poor, deprived, oppressed and humiliated. The reader also feels the gains of the rich, opportunist, affluent, wanted and influential. The cross becomes a burden too heavy to bear before fortune provides him with the key…he meets a woman in need. All these, Lateef Adeola Sanusi tries to blend in this very great work of art.

 Though this book is a novel, (prose) it has elements of drama and poetry which makes it total literature. This novel is recommended for everybody that has life and is living it. For the old, especially the Elites, it replays your youthful days as it brings good memories of the past.

 For the middle aged; the experience of the novel can re- direct your life. For the young, you definitely need to read this novel, as reading it may equip you with the experiences you need to cope with the “maddening society”.

 For the Youth Corp Members, (NYSC) this novel is specially recommended for you. Bala, the hero of the novel is your contemporary, hence you stand to gain a lot from his experience. The novel is suitable and therefore recommended- For both sexes as both sexes will apportion blames to Bala or Linda. 

There is no gain saying that the author has painstakingly composed and written a good literary piece. For this I sincerely congratulate him for a thorough job. To the readers, the taste of the pudding is in the eating. Please read on!

Alhaji A.M. Olubajo 
Principal General, 
Teaching service Commission (TSC),
 Ijebu Division. Ogun State,
 Nigeria. February, 2010.



PREFACE

 Written by Lateef Sanusi, A woman in Need is an encompassing and experiential novel, seeking to package as much of the feels and trills of contemporary Nigeria. The life story of the lead character, Bala, forms the thread that holds together various aspects of the Nigerian life which the writer takes pains to unravel. The writer introduces Bala, a member of the national Youth Service Corps, who has returned to Nigeria to fulfill this service. He is naturally tuned to the life he had lived overseas and uses this as a basis for assessing the Nigerian society. Bala’s background enables the writer to make pertinent comments about the Nigerian polity.

 Being able to compare what he finds here to what obtained in the west, makes very strong statements about the conditions that prevail in Nigerian. Quite often, Bala is alarmed at situations that the everyday Nigerian would gloss over as normal.

THE STORY 
The story is told around Bala, a returnee Nigerian who had schooled overseas. His roots are firmly in Nigeria as he has a lover and a daughter, apparently a love child. He lives with Linda and their daughter in Kano but often has to leave them to attend to his
assignments in Riagabiu, where he is serving out his one-year mandatory service to the nation. 

Things began to turn out of shape when he receives a rude shock on a plane. He saw someone he was so sure was Linda on a flight. Back home, he confirms the sinking feeling in his heart. Linda had left him, after tricking him into allowing their daughter to go to join her parents in Abeokuta. Surviving this treachery was still on his mind when Rashidat, his daughter takes ill. He makes the tortuous journey by rail and road, for reasons of poor finances, to see her. He is on his way back to Kano when he is told that Rashidat had died. His life was coming apart right before his eyes.                                   
Fortune throws him in Ngozi’s path. Ngozi is a wealthy woman who picks him up and nurtures him to the point he became a part of her vast business empire. She is eventually to become his wife. She unfortunately dies while being delivered of a set of twins for Bala. Once more, sorrow dogs him. Between losing Linda and meeting Ngozi, Bala makes desperate efforts to solve what he sees as the unusually circumstances of his life. He goes through a maze of experiences including a haunting adventure into the supernatural with a certain spiritualist who makes all manners of summation on who Bala is and would become.

Things happen like a blur and another twist brings the same Linda back into his life. Linda, against all expectations and to the chagrin of many, would again become the love of his life and inherit with him all that Ngozi had lived and built up with Bala. The story, in spite of the multitude of sorrows that litter its pages, ends well for Bala. He is undeniably happy to be reunited with Linda where the world would have relished a dramatic retaliation of Linda’s bare-faced treachery that left him severely devastated.

CRITICAL OPINIONS Critical opinions already exist, mainly from critics who have read the draft and have evaluated the issues that emanate from the work.
A number of critics have come down harshly on the character of Bala who appears unwilling to do anything for himself. Becoming so used to having people do the dirty work for him, he frequents the corridors of the rich. Having a child out of wedlock and living with a woman unmarried do not help his case.

 This in fact underlies why some do not see Linda’s behavior as unforgivable especially since she is not much different from Bala, wanting to enjoy the finished product. His adventure into the realm of the spiritual attracts knocks as well. Whereas he sees himself as deep in problems, the only thing that can be established is that he has not found a job, weeks to
completing the national service. 

This is a predicament that cannot be considered abnormal and should not necessitate seeking spiritual help. The death of his daughter Rashidat certainly shook him but the path he toes is not the ones critics would recommend for everyone in the same shoes. Yet other critics doubt the dedication Bala gave Ngozi going by the reason of his immediate acceptance of Linda back into the affections she scorned. Although it is hard to establish, there are suggestions that he only used Ngozi to tide over difficult period and was glad to get his life back on the track. 

This opinion has been highly debated. It is in fact seen as a commendation to the writer for not following what would have been the most expected path of actions. It would have been more expected and accepted course of action would have been to outrightly reject her after making her rue her actions. Even if she would be taken back, she would have been made to go through some grueling process that would authenticate the new profession of love. However, these do not happen. It is purely in recognition that human nature is not plotted on a graph and human actions can defy logic and permutations.

THE SYTLE There is no debating that it is full novel complete with all the trappings of a fully told tale. The writer
spreads the events in the story through the country and takes the pains to include a number of extras that add to the full color of the story. The story is told from the first person point of view, which allows the writer to express his convictions. His economic and political convictions lead the way as he reacts to the traffic situation, to the Nigerian market, to the cost of living, to electricity challenges, to transportation and to health. Social welfare and class segregation also find good mention in the novel. Bala attends a party where he sees Linda, but where he would not dare move near where her caliber (or the caliber of her escort) sat.

THE WRITER Lateef Sanusi satisfies a deep-seated desire to strike out in the literary world. Barely finding time in his automobile company job. He resorts to using the brief time-off coming from the short periods of inventory-taking in the company to address his novel. The outcome is not only satisfying for Sanusi, it is my opinion that it is an exciting work that everyone should read.

Udoaka, Lucky Ezekiel (MNIM)
 Lecturer, Lagos City Polytechnic,
 Ikeja.
 Nigeria. January, 2010. 
    
                                                              PART ONE

                                                          CHAPTER ONE
Getting up from siesta, I felt like I had been on my back for two weeks. Indeed, it was owing to the Saturday all-night party I attended. I had dined and wined like I had never done before. I went into the bathroom, had a nice shower, and prepared myself for the journey back to Rigabiu - a small town of about two hundred kilometres from Kano, the centre of industrial and commercial activities in the northern part of Nigeria.

 Whenever I came back from Rigabiu to my lovely Linda to spend the weekend with her, I hated going back to that locality. It had none of the city's pulchritude and western or modern frolicsomeness that I had been used to while I was a secondary school student in Lagos, and for all my close to seven years sojourn in Britain. Moreover, to leave Linda for five days in a week was to me, like eternity. Rigabiu is the headquarters of a local government.

 Our company was carrying on a construction project in this area, – the construction of a road that would link Hadejia to Kano, bypassing Rigabiu. Consequently, after the day’s job, we always pass the night at Rigabiu. We still had about three more weeks before we moved to another location where we could pass the nights if things went on as planned. 

I was about to call Linda to give me some food when as if she knew what I have been contemplating, she appeared and said, ‘’Bala, I think you will like to have something?’’ Truly, I needed food more than anything else. I was just recovering from the adverse effect of drinks. I had taken too much drink. Therefore, I needed a nice meal before my peregrination to Rigabiu that was now a weekly ritual. This was my routine and was bound to remain that way for the rest of my one-year national service.

After I had eaten, I dressed up and was about to leave. In fact, Linda and I had all along been staying together for about three years and it was only in recent months that circumstance had compelled us to stay with each other for only two days in a week. And two months gone, it remained only ten months which were not much although to me, it seemed like perpetuity before I would be done with my service year so we could live together once more and to part no more with my lovely Linda. We had planned to have our wedding not long after I might have finished my national service. We were unmarried and we were great lovers. Between us, we had a baby girl from the relationship. She was two years old.

Each time I was leaving for my station, Linda would hug and cling to me, and kiss me several times. I would feel her heartbeats like the hammer of a blacksmith doing justice to stubborn steel.  ‘Darling, how I wish you were never posted to that construction firm for your primary assignment. Without you, life is too boring in Kano,’ she murmured. After reassuring her, I would tell her that there was no sacrifice that was too much for one’s nation.

 I would grope for words to explain that this would only be for one year, after which we would be able to stay together as before till death did us part. Watching me as I packed a few things into my bag, she started playing with my beards and planted a kiss on my right cheek. Whenever she did this to me, I always felt on top of the Himalayas. Linda was gorgeous and very beautiful. She was the type of woman every man would like to introduce as his wife. I admired her long legs, good set of teeth that glittered like diamonds.

 Her silky hair reminded me of Amina who was my secondary school mate. Amina was the first girl with whom I had fallen in love. Those were my secondary school days when every one admired my spirit of sportsmanship. She was the daughter of one of the most efficacious political cum intellectual elites in the country who was then a commissioner and who had many a time represented Nigeria and led Nigerian delegations to international deliberations.

 He was unreserved in his faithfulness and service to the nation, and would never condone any act that violated the entrusted commitment to the society from any of his comrades or political associates. And it is an effulgent aristocratic brilliance indeed! It was during the inter-house sports, which was a yearly event in our school. I represented my schoolhouse in four events: relay race, hundred-meter dash, high-jump and slow- cycle race. 

I came second in the first three events but came first in the cycle race. It was only when I finished the cycle race that I realized that Amina and I have been silent lovers. The slow cycle race was the toughest of all the events that I had participated in. It lasted for thirty minutes and the fellow who came second lost his balance a few minutes before the race ended. Excellence in the sport required concentration, energy, and a good bicycle.

 Each participant was confined to a track about two feet wide. The winner could be the last participant to reach the tape if he is the only one that never went beyond the two-foot wide sidelines of the track and never touched the earth with either of his feet until the end of the race. Going by the rules, the contestant who kept all the rules, even if he arrived the tape last, would be declared winner. I actually beat my former record which stood at twenty two minutes, forty seconds.
Therefore, when at the end of the race my foot touched the earth, it was a thunderous cheer that greeted me from the spectators. 

All the students from my schoolhouse came to congratulate me and share the moment with me and the house in particular. Students from my schoolhouse shook hands with me and when it was Amina’s turn, she gave me a firm kiss on the cheek. ‘You are great Bala,”   she intoned. ‘’I knew you would make it and give the house a good representation for I have always watched you during practice with keen interest, she added as she offered me some glucose drink to take as it was glaring to everybody that I was exhausted.

 Since then, Amina and I became an appetizing two-of-a-kind in the school. We did things in common and those who did not know us well believed us to be twins. Every one in the school acknowledged Amina’s beauty, her gaiety, poise, and chocolate complexion as a rare combination. When she spoke the English language, one needed no telling that she had a foreign orientation. She had finished her elementary school in England. The blue blood that runs in her veins had made her burglar-proof from many prying eyes in the school. 

The only unhappy and apprehensive moment for me in the school was when her father withdrew her to continue her education in the United States of America. I soon got over it since I was preparing for my final examination and would in a few months say good-bye to secondary school life. I have often wondered what would have become of us if her father had allowed her to remain in Nigeria. Perhaps we would have become something more to each other or perhaps we would have broken up. Secondary school love was not something as binding as the kind of relationship that had developed with Linda across the years.

Linda was everything I would have wanted in a woman. I was perfectly satisfied with what I had in Linda. Eventually, I left the room and bid my lovely Linda goodbye. When I boarded the taxi-cab, she stood still and would not move until the cab was out of her sight. I reached Rigabiu at about seven in the evening.

 What time it was did not matter to me since I knew there was nothing to occupy me but to be in bed for the rest of the night. As I was about leaving the motor park, I ran into Bello. Bello was the field engineer in the company where I served and I was directly responsible to him. Bello had gained a good reputation from the management owing to his diligence, faithfulness and hardwork. Moreover, there was never a time he had betrayed the confidence reposed on him. He had just completed his sixth year in the company at the time I was posted there. I was posted to the company for my one-year national service from the National Youth Service Corps (NYSC) secretariat in Kano.

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